Bloggeratti's very first Contest was held in July, 2008. It was a POETRY contest, with the theme "CHILD ABUSE". The entries were judged by ELAAN, an NGO dealing with Child Sexual Abuse. Although the winners were initially supposed to be announced in August, due to unavoidable circumstances, the Judge could not have a look at the entries on time. I too, got busy with my MBA course, and the whole thing got delayed by months.
26 entries were received in all. The winner was finally announced on 25th November. Pali Tripathi was declared the winner for her entry titled "Bread.Pieces."
I would like to take this opportunity to thank each and every one of them for participating in it, and also for being very patient with the announcement of the results.
Here's the Poem...
Bread. Pieces
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Bread. Pieces. Stale
Spoon. Stained. Half
Plate. Broken.One
Pan.Dry. Empty
Table. Brown. Dirty
Door. Bell. Footsteps
Silence. Fear. Apprehension
Man. Thin. Tatters
Eyes. Cold. Piercing
Gazes. Afraid. Numb
Sound. Loud. Harsh
Child. Tears. Gurgle
Bread. Pieces. Gone
Faces. White. Wounded
Mouths. Pained. Dry
Door. Shut. Bang
Father. Drunk. Asleep
Mother. Deaf. Diseased
Children. Dumb. Broken
Life. Limp. Lost
Love. Desired. Denied.
- Pali Tripathi
26 entries were received in all. The winner was finally announced on 25th November. Pali Tripathi was declared the winner for her entry titled "Bread.Pieces."
I would like to take this opportunity to thank each and every one of them for participating in it, and also for being very patient with the announcement of the results.
Here's the Poem...
Bread. Pieces
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Bread. Pieces. Stale
Spoon. Stained. Half
Plate. Broken.One
Pan.Dry. Empty
Table. Brown. Dirty
Door. Bell. Footsteps
Silence. Fear. Apprehension
Man. Thin. Tatters
Eyes. Cold. Piercing
Gazes. Afraid. Numb
Sound. Loud. Harsh
Child. Tears. Gurgle
Bread. Pieces. Gone
Faces. White. Wounded
Mouths. Pained. Dry
Door. Shut. Bang
Father. Drunk. Asleep
Mother. Deaf. Diseased
Children. Dumb. Broken
Life. Limp. Lost
Love. Desired. Denied.
- Pali Tripathi
5 comments:
this is one of the most moving poems i hav ever read. this stuff deserves a standing ovation!!! wow!! its unlike any other poem i hav ever read before.
Cheers,
Annie.
Wow. Pali Tripathi. Hats off!
Its not exactly what you would call a poem is it? It is more like a collection of groups of related words of three. But somehow it creates a greater impression on one's mind than any other poem.
A very precision piece of writing, exact and to te point.Nice neat phrases.Well deserved win.
A very precision piece of writing, exact and to te point.Nice neat phrases.Well deserved win.
thanks guys..saw this only now:-)
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